Vaguely reminiscent of Ann Rice. Sure the vampire genre has been done a lot, but hell, vamps are just irristable to write about. The narrative is good, and I could definetly visualize this even as it contains an eerie dream-like quality to this.

Good stuff.

I've read my fair share of stories on FP, and I've got to say that many writing styles and plots are too similar, almost certainly regurgitated, but you're writing style is one that is totally unique; there's nothing else like it. I don't know why a lot of people complain about you're spelling; it's nigh imposible to find any grammar errors. This piece was sort of confusing here and there, but then again so are dreams. Thanks for the Moloch Bar rview, the next five chapters of the sotry are sitting in my hardrive bearing their teeth, it'll be up soon, and thanks for the publishing offer.~ JD

I read this awhile back, and as with most of your stories I never reviewed. But here it is. This was a fantastic piece. Your dreams are described so well sometimes it feels as if I'm reading back into an actual one, not just a bunch of words piled together... that probably made no sense. But it's like I can actually see the dream, and along with that it's a nice story overall. Once again- great job. ~I.W.

Here's my pledge to you, Nicky: each time you take down the review I leave for your story, I will return the following day and post it again. Either gain control of Fictionpress and ban reviews, or be prepared to spend a lot of time taking down reviews that don't praise your collection of misspelled words. Here's my review: this was terrible. Learn to spell first, then learn how to write. Hope that helps!

very nice!!

awesome. beautiful. awesome descriptions. i like how you made it like the guy writing it down . . . it's amazing. there's just not enough words to . . . all right it was awesome. fav list quality.
id just like to say thanks for your reviews. youre a really good writer. did you get an email from some guy named Mercedes talking about being published by Xlibris? Just asking. I dunno.
thanks for giving me a good lesson about reviews. you said i should stop putting r/r me at the end. you said i should start emailing people, but for some reason my server isn't letting me send emails lately, so im giving this a shot. anyway, i think that you two (the guy who keeps changing his penname and you) are kind of like mentors to me. thanks.
i can't wait for more writing from you.
~~sg

Wow!
This was just great. Nick, you did really good. I liked the word choice, and your imagery in this as well.
This is a nice piece, extremely well done.
Whispers In Silence

Hello there,
I just wanted to say that I thought this was very interesting indeed.I have had dreams that I wasnt sure if it was really a dream but real. I LOVE vampires and I really enjoyed reading your story, If you like vamps you should check out my stuff.

Interesting premise. I'm searching for stories to help me learn how to make a decent horror fic (I have one planned as a future sequel of one of my fanficts) and this is well written. Not so much horror as a hook, this chapter is, but that's how all good scary stories begin. I look forward to seeing what becomes of this.

Wow, this is great! I checked out a few of your otehrs stories as well and they were all just as good! You reviewed me so I figured it to be my be interest and review your work as well. Good luck on future writings and hope each one is just as good as the next!

Hello. You reviewed me before. I went to read your story. I found it enjoyable enough. Very good. Good Luck with your other storys here!!