hello there. I thought what u wrote was pretty good! at least you're way better than me. :O( any tips on how i can write as good as u? :O)

Hey, don't apologise, this was good. It's not badly written either- not every poem has to be a masterpiece and I doubt that many poems actually are. That's the thing about writing- you can express how you feel, your thoughts... and it doesn't have to make sense. As long as you are expressing yourself then that's all that matters. This poem was meaningful, it asked some thought-provoking questions. Good work, keep writing :)

*cosmo-queen*