It's cute! I love this poem. I love the rhymes as well as how moving it is.

ack! you're one of those annoying people forcing me to utilize my brain and log in! it's bloody 8 in the morning here...! agghh! ::slashes things:: anyway, that's cute, in a non-nauseating sort of way. i like it, the words just sound good together. thanks for the review! agh, i'm bloody chipper this morning...must be the lack of caffine. ::shrugs:: anyway, good job. meh...

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amusing poem- liked the subject matter.

i thought this started off well, but the rhyme got a little repetitive..