I adore it! I absolutely love vampire poetry/fiction. It was wonderfully detailed and emotional. Perfection, keep it up. Great penname by the way!

nice and subtle; that is, I think, the best way to write a vampire story, and you've written a delightfully sensual short vampire story.
well done.

Loved it! _ I absolutely adore vampires and works about them, this is the best vampire poem I have ever read! It's so full of lush detail and the words themselves are mesmerizing. Keep the absoultely fantastic work!
Lots o Love,
Sorrow

Chilling...Excellent descriptions, you painted such a haunting, clear picture. Heehee, I'm having so much fun going through all your other pieces. *ACK* I'm mentioned in your profile...that's nuts...:)

ELise

*moans* Why can't I write like that? I mean you write so...oh what's the word? Iono, anywho! Loved it! Sent chills down my spine!

Hope you write more soon!

Corie