fire is like a human it requires air, oxogen to survive wihout that, it becomes nothing. Water could kill us. It smuthers us. But also it refreshes us we can't live with out it. Fire could be reffered to as an emotion. This is a great poem

its really good though i kindda have to say i dont think the same about fire cause i guess being a pyromaniac, its reflexs to think fire is one of the beatiful really good bye.

This is good, but I'm pyrophobic... *shudders* I once tried to write a poem about fire, too, but it went all wrong...

This was flawless.

Heart of the Sword

Yes, i agree very nice descriptions...I loved it.

wonderful imagery! excellent job, keep writing