From my own personal twisted opinion , and from what it has inspired into me , I think it's about your inner child that was never out and now he tries to because you feel all alone.
I know , I know, I'm stupid.

i really like it. especially the words that you spelled differently, that was cool. :o)

Dude, indirect writing is cool and all, but don't make it completely nonsensical. Like most of the things made sense until
"The gods of the night
Burn into my skin
Sing to me and die for this being
Starve and parish"

What does that mean? now exibit B

I should be with them to die
Only if this goes on
The pain
I want
Will now be gone

Okay dude, who the hell is "them" and how can you want pain that you already have? and how is he experiencing pain if he's all blissful in his son's arms and all?

there is also some other lines that are out of place, but let's not let that get in the way of my picky criticism. Like some of the stuff you have is great. I like the whole idea of the son leaving but coming back for one more hug and all...but its quality not quantity so don't be afraid to take out the parts that don't make sense and there is a lot of those. One more criticism...and it refers to all your writing...you don't have to interject olde english into your writing...you could write an entire song out of olde english but don't put olde english into songs that you've already put in modern english...so forget all the shakespearian crap, or just forget modern language...but don't just throw in every once and while "thee" and "thy" and "thou" it sounds almost as pretentious as the rest of the poem.

-C of D

P.S. don't feel too bad because remember you can bash my writing too. Just support it with facts.

Wow... I like this one a lot! It doesn't surprise me though because everything YoU do is AwEsOmE! Keep it up!

whoa...im not sure exactly what this on, but it was good. still not my fav, but really good just the same. its well...sad. makes me sad. a great ending tho, i like how u have that last line seperate from the rest, good job all the way around!