WoW! GREAT! I really mean it. I like her strong and independent. PLEASE UPDATE MORE!

si me gusta me chica!
this is coming along beautifully!
the plot is thickening quite nicely (lol) and your characters are developing into real people...
i can't wait to see more...

Wow I really like this!! I can already tell it's gonna be a tear jerker... ::gets tissues ready:: I never knew about Alex's brother! That's horrible. I would have been so mad at being forced to leave, 'cause I would wanna rip that man's head off. Well, either that or just break down. Ah! Both. ::nods firmly:: That probably started some sort of grudge. I hope you write more soon! I'm real curious to see what happens next!! Ganbatte ne! ::glomp::

cool I like I like...full of mystery and seems like there is going to be tons of adventure...just watch out for a few easliy misspelt words most of them spell check won't pick up so re-read sometimes and watch out for those they like to sneak up on you they also sneak up on me too...so keep up the good work ::glomp:: and write more it is really really good.