-speechless-

Amazing is the only word that comes close to describing this. Truly amazing.

I never told you how much I like this piece, did I? I love its soft melancholy. The line “I went without my name/ And missing it, was always looking back,” is particularly haunting. The poem puts me in mind of a very old fairy tale, with all the dying grace that such grandeur evokes. You never cease to surprise me with your talent.

This poem is beautiful. True poetry, real poetry...

that was really amazing. I think you'll become famous someday, really, truly.

Wow! What more can I say?? This is an absolutely incredible poem! Deffinately going into the favorites. The imagery here is... just exquisite! And the style, and the repitition... excellent, excellent poem!! :o)

i love this poem! i LOVE it i LOVE it i LOVE it! ah!

the rhythm, the rhyme...it is so incredibly moving...

*you are a genius*

-n-

A beautiful poem, dude. I mean, wow. It takes a brilliant person to be able to write all pretty-like, and you, my friend, are a very brilliant person, indeed.

::sighs:: Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. I wish i could write poetry. Sometimes, raw emotion bubbles up through my hands, and that spills out onto my computer screen. That's what my "poetry" is. Yours has definite emotion, too. Its rhythm took my breath away; it added to the mood/atmosphere (i can't remember if there's a distinction b/t the two, heh) in a way it is impossible to describe. This was wonderful, something positively worthy of being published. ::sighs again::

**, man! (for lack of a better expression)

Chilling. haunting. excellent! Beautiful, beautiful work! I love it! This is going into my favorites list! Thanks to Ashlene for pointing this poem out.

Write more stuff like this!!

Wow. This is an incredibly touching story, a beautifully written piece in simple dramatic words. Wow.