Ah too true. There's just something that makes this sound to real. (Love the pen name btw.)

Wow... simply beautiful. It's very good. I love it!!

If you could reveiw my work, I would appericate it. Thanks!

Heh-- I liked this.. Its so true.. I myself have never managed to express it that way.. But this is cute actually.. The endin.. Cool theme.. Very interestin..

heh, this made me laugh, in a good way, very cynical and short and its just one of those things, love it though, muchly enjoyed, awesome job

One little word (or lack thereof) can really get you sometimes, ne?

Meaningful...Good job!!

i hate it when that happens. makes things so much more complicated.
i love the way you wrote this. i can hear the voice in my head, like someone next to me is explaining what it's like. very good.

I like.

ok i'm tired of saying fabulous, but ah once again, really really great work!