That was so sweet...I feel like crying right now. Really gorgeous piece. :)

my gosh this is so sad! im crying by just reading it! its so sad...but its so sweet!

Great story :)

:'(

This is so beautiful & touching.

Bittersweet is the only way to describe it.

Well, well, well done.

-Anatha

Oh my gosh! This was so amazing! You tell suck a vivid and emtional story all through one scene, and it's perfect! I couldn't find a thing wrong with it. This was so sweet and wonderful, great job! This is a favorite!

~RoseSama35~

Beautiful and poignant. I had tears in my eyes.

aw...this is so beautiful. Great job on capturing every detail so perfectly! :)

This was a beautiful story. I love how, though it is short, Jack and Lila are both well developed characters. Wonderful descriptions.

great piece of wrting...i like the way you describe the scenario and out life into the characters...

this was so pretty. i really loved it.

You got me all teared-up! Jack went to jail? At least he learned from it.

Lila's so sad. But she got to know Jack before she left. And I bet that they're happy, since they still lived happily.

Julia.

wow,..that was amasing,...

Sad, but astonishing.