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| Incubabe 2003-08-03 ch 1,  | abuseWow! This poem kicks major **! I love it! It's just the right side of dark - I love that last stanza, its perfect! "Hear me scream never more with my last breath" - dark and angsty - yay!! I'm off to read more of your stuff!! |
| Gauy 2003-06-04 ch 1, | abuseWOW! You got a wow review ... two actually. This is very good. I'm feeling better, though now I'm sure that what I did worry about did happen. But Rose is alright so that's better. |
| Kyketsuki Tenshi 2003-06-04 ch 1, | abusereally really really good. Vocab and rhythem are 10 out of 10 in my opinion, youve beaten me, well done. |
| P.A. Lovas 2003-06-03 ch 1, | abusewow. That was just...wow. Beautiful, dark, wonderful. Very nice. You rock the poetry world. Keep rocking. |
| Damaged 2003-06-03 ch 1, | abuseWhoa! This is dark but VERY GOOD! You have a bunch of talent. One question: why would ANYONE flame this?! This is so beautiful! Keep up the writing! |
| Eternal Twilight 2003-06-03 ch 1, | abuseAck, that's deep! O.O Man, and I thought I wrote pretty good poems- yours beat mine with a stick! ^^ Wonderful job, Lovely- and I'm glad that you did take time and put energy into it- the best poems are the ones that people stop and put their heart and soul into. ^^ Keep it up, Raven! TTYL! ~Bloss |
| Incruentus 2003-06-03 ch 1, | abusewhoa, cool. time and patience are the key to god poetry. or sudde impulse at times. but it's really good. |