Great story! I haven't read all of it, just bits and pieces. I'm actually kinda loving Adam at times. He's a trouble maker and a player he redeemed himself in the end. I'd really like to read a sequel about what happened with him and Audrey. Or at the very least to see his son growing up to be a ladies man himself and see how he deals with that.

Great story, keep up the good work.

Excellent piece

I loved it.

wow!! i love this story!! and i finally finished reading it! you should really write more stories, maybe a sequel to this one. but then who would it be about? hmm...decisions, decisions. anyways, see ya!

-Michelle Habibi

wow, this story is so captivating...from beginning to end. great job!

Yay! so good! id write something more but its like 1 am and im dead to the world. ciao!

I think this story is strongly based on very bad-timing. very much like romeo and juliet mind you, although i think i like this tale better. Unless someone dies at the end...

Ok so this is my theory. Madeleine and Desmond used to be in love and she left him because she didnt want to disgrace him or something. At a certain point, i thought Desmond was gay but i dont think thats the case anymore. Anyway, i guess ill see if im right!

Oh i love forbidden romances! so very Romeo and Juliet. anyway, im really liking the start although at first i thought the romance was to be between Bella and Adam. Maybe it will be since in the summary u mentionned an Englishman so it could go either way. I guess we'll see.

good

*can't stop smiling - now* i have had a horrible day- well not whole day but i have had some really horrendous incidents today which would have better not happen but you *smiling yet* have taken my mind from it completely *grin* ...that was perfect, they are so sweet, so made for each other *still smiling* and the epilogue and cat were the greatest additions for a lovely ending...ahh if only really life were that wonderful *sigh* - oh yeah i am still smling...you made my day...thanks hon a lot!

that was fantastic! and everything worked out so well!

i am reading behind spread fingers atm ... i really hate disapproved love lol i'll finish it soon. great writing!

great story! love a happy ending. i think my favorite character is isabella's dad. he says the funniest things. anyone that can leave Mrs. Hastings speach less is definitely skilled. anyways, goos job with this story!