I haven't read this story again in ages (the 1st chapter months ago) but this is just spectacular.

I still love the wordplay. The simplicity of the scenario betrays depth underneath...

UPDATE!

J/k, no pressure for the artist ;p

This is going into my fav's list... Ciao~

[foxdance]

*grins very wide* I have missed your writing so much!! Welcome back!
This is romance at it's best, you are such a master with it. Your style is between prose and poetry, and I envy you so.
Wonderful job! Beautiful touch with dialouge.
-Cindy Moon *)

aw ure story is god

vinny it's actually semi-happy for ONCE.. -_-

yay i like this story

keep it up



AND DON'T KILL TOO MANY PEOPLE IN THIS ONE

vinny u wrote too well about rain
i thot it was really raining after awhile.. o.O
but that's a good sign!

haha ttylz

-diana

Need I say more?
Once again you capture emotion in its rawest form.

Aw, that's lovely. =) Awesome JoB!! WILL THERE BE MORE?!?! =)
Very good job. Tres Bien!
Tres Bon!

woah... that was really good... no words... lol, that was really awesome... @_@ just everything about it, it was good. I pretty much told u everything that stood out, but other than that, it was perfect. u know... what I was thinking, I was thinking that u should add another guy in there for a love triangle... add a lot more drama that way... that'd be interesting... well, ur the author, so it's up to u. GOOd chapter, keep writing (I have a feeling u'll actually update in less than one month's time)

That was such a nice chapter :) I love the way you describe everything; it makes the relatively simple situation so much more interesting and alive. Keep this up...