 honey splattered brains 2009-02-18 . chapter 8ew. i dont like anyone except mikah. D: the story plotline is still cool though c: |
 Lovedward48 2008-08-19 . chapter 42 OMG that was brilliant!! I love it!! I can't say wich couple I love more. They're all just way too cute!!^^ |
 efphrim 2008-03-24 . chapter 1I already like this story. |
 i-see-faeries 2007-07-25 . chapter 42Well that was an interesting read. It took me a while, but I did it. LOL. I love it. I really do; I thnk you have a great plot. But I do have constructive criticism though.
For one, your characters seem shallowly developed outside their love lives. I realize that it's probably because that's what the story is about, but even so, chracters development is essential for a story to seem alive. Also, you try to create angst for Mikah, I believe, but that seemed kind of weak as well. I don't know. It just seems like a lot of overstating to me. His situation isn't that bad, not any worse than mine or anyone that lives in my town. And the ending seems kind of abrupt. I know ending a story at a sad part with a sort of cliffhanger is popular, but it's still hard to do correctly.
Note. I did not say this to be mean. I love your story, I really do. The humor amuses me and the romance makes me smile. And I know it's a little too late to critique, but I though I'd do it anyways. And after all, this story is old. I'm positive you're a whole of a lot better writer now. I do love this, and I'll be reading the sequal soon! |
 rose.tinted.lies 2007-06-04 . chapter 1I keep thinking I've reviewed this story (and I may have. If so, forget that last statement, and pretty much this whole thing, 'cause it's likely I've said it before ^.^ I have a really bad memory).
At first my favourite character was Mikah, but throughout the story it changed and became Kael. I can't help it - he's so damn cute!
I know I'm reviewing for the first chapter, but I've read the whole thing >.<
Your writing is amazing! I love the way you describe emotions, and that you don't skip over anything.
I'd write more, but I have a tonne of homework, and most of it's due tommorow xD
Anyway, this was a great story!
Ciao! |
 Scribbles Go On Forever 2007-02-24 . chapter 41WOW! amazing! i am about to go onto Reckless - |
 Kyle's Precious Little Girl 2006-12-14 . chapter 41*grins*
It took me like...4 days to read the whole thing, but i finally did it! And i'm so impressed with this story! It was really good! And now i'm going to read reckless! yay
Kepp up the great work!
~Kyle's Precious Little Girl |
 Kizuna 2006-08-05 . chapter 41Oh my God! How could it end like this?!! Well, I must start read Reckless now,because this was to cruel!!:'( But the story is the best!^^ |
 Kizuna 2006-08-05 . chapter 40Ah! They are so sweet together! Even though Kael is really angsty! But I like that!!^^ |
 Kizuna 2006-08-05 . chapter 39Poor Kael!!I feel so sorry for him!! But he's still cute, though!^^ |
 Kizuna 2006-08-05 . chapter 38Sully and Kael are sweet!^^ And the scene with Skylar and Mikah was so cool!^^ Gosh, I wonder if his father get to see him with blue hair!! |
 Kizuna 2006-08-05 . chapter 37Gosh... Thatwas sweet!!^^ |
 Kizuna 2006-08-05 . chapter 36Oh, will Sully make up with Kael??^^ Hope so!^^ |
 Kizuna 2006-08-05 . chapter 35Ahaha! Skylar is just so cool!!^^ |
 Kizuna 2006-08-05 . chapter 34Hmm... Falling in love with a twin, isn't that kind of falling in love with oneself?:-/ I just come to think of it!!^^ Poor Kael, Sully's an **, but still: poor him to... Did that make sense? Probably not, but well... I loved the scene with Mikah! He love Skylar, but doesn't know it's Skylar!!:p So cute!!^^ |