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| Ima-Wasteland 2003-07-13 ch 1,  | abusethank you for your reviews, they were very nice. i love this poem, it is swet yer forbidding in it's own way. much loved and much enjoyed. ~*~erika~*~ |
| Hinkle 2003-07-01 ch 1, | abuseI would certainly say the last line captures the essence of love. I love this simple poem... |
| Jezabelle Valo 2003-06-04 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was your first ever poem? Someone's a bit of a natural! You should see my first ones, they're pitiful! Anyway, keep writing! xxJxx |
| tahayov 2003-06-04 ch 1, | abusethis is real good for a first poem..its simple yet very beatuful..i wonder how the rest of ur work looks like..ill go c :) |
| catviolist 2003-06-04 ch 1, | abusedid u say that that was your first poem? all i can say is... wow. i really like the simpleness of it. it's really refreshing. |
| Semi-charmed life 2003-06-04 ch 1, | abuseThis is very good. Simple yet somehing deeper. Excellent first piece. Keep writing and check out some of my stuff if u'd like. Peaceout |