Merlin...what wonderful Haikus! I must say I was in awe with Loyalty. Somehow I felt myself walking over glass and following tracks of blood...Really, nice work.

Far too true...::sigh::

Hm...shocking, but it fits into the sequence of luminary divinity, strangely, but it does.

Yes, I did read some of these before, but too bad, I'm going to finish and read all of them. I'm glad I did.

This one's my favorite over the other four. I love the message it carries and how it's told. GREAT work!

This one was neat, but in my mind, it didn't really carry too strong of a message, as much as the last three I read. Maybe just the way it was written or something, I don't know. It was a nice concept, though.

Really interesting concept with this one. Innovative!

I like the last line, that summed up the rest of the haiku very well. Sometimes, that's how we can interpret the reality of the world. Awesome job!

Really neat way to put it. Good job.

A great collection of haikus you have here, I especially liked the fourth one. So true. Update soon :)
*cosmo-queen*

The picture this produced... Wow. What more can be said? It was amazing!

~ CoolBeans18s

Wow! I loved the truth in this... Its an amazing poem!

~ CoolBeans18s

Wow! That was such an amazing description! You can almost feel something watching you...*shudders* Great piece!

~ CoolBeans18s

wow...great piece! deep, like the message. good job on all of these. keep writing!

awesome piece. full of truth, powerful words. great message. superb work! keep on writing!