Hm...I see more of what's behind this poem. (Heck, I'm good at analyzing what emotions and all lye behind the writing of a poem.) this isn't aimed toward me (if I'm wrong don't let me know) this is aimed toward someone else. I don't want to talk to you about because I know it's probably too personal. But I have to say that I understand what your subconcious was saying.
~the pyro of pyros~
P.S. *grumble* This is a poem that only the subconcious of a person can understand. I'm saying this because my subconcious knows something about this poem but won't tell me. *glares at his subconcious*

you always have a way with words.

ack...so bloody beautiful...this isn't about me, at least, i hope to Ra it isn't...alli does not need her friends writing angst about her...::Cringe:: more, anyway...if it is, i'm really sorry...either way, this is incredible...you've even got a nice rhyme scheme going. great job, mysti. you continue to outshine me every day. but that's a good thing. about the email address...i'm very VERY bored. neway, gorgeous. i love it...told you i'd review this!

~~alli~~