huh? The ending I'm not too sure about. Regardless thanks for the read it was interesting. Have you given up on this story?

It's a very cute story and I love Tyler..he's awesome. I hope Cien finds someone so that he doesn't die! That would be tragic considering how amazing he is. What's with this sudden unicorn boy...I'm very curious now...

You should update this eventually, but if you don't, I understand.

Interesting. The heat is taking a toll on poor Cien, huh? What if his mate is... dun dun dun... his mother?

Wow! I guessed that Cien, Tyler, and Whin would be in a threesome? My question is... how would Tyler be able to handle of all of this, considering that he had never been in a relationship with a male before he came to Royette. One was hard enough for him to adjust to, but two... hm... I'm curious as how this is going to work.

Heehee. I wonder who Cien is going to mate with. Heh.

Hmm... I have a weird idea of what might happen between Cien, Whin, and Tyler. It is probably wrong, though. Oh well. Although the chapter is short, it makes me curious.

Damn. A cliffhanger. Off to read the next chapter. Great job on this chapter by the way. You progressively improved as you wrote these chapters.

If I were Tyler, the clinginess would probably drive me insane, too. Whim is clingy to the extreme, but I understand why, considering that I read Chapter 13. Poor Tyler.

Heh. Whim isn't nearly as violent as he used to be at all. He was much more aggressive in the beginning chapters, and now he seems very laid-back. His servants must have been envious of him, considering that he has a very hot 16 (almost 17)-year-old boy at his hands.

Yeah, I liked this lemon better than the first one. It was so cute... and sexy. You're getting better each time.

One word: Adorable

Nice. It was worth the wait. Apparently, the boys didn't have stamina. It's okay, though. It was so hot.

Wow. I knew that Sil and Reese were trying to get those two together pretty much the entire time. I wasn't that surprised. What I was surprised about, however, was how the queen told Tye that Whin was attracted to him. I believe that Whin is a little, which is why I didn't say that Reese made that part up. Good job, though.

Awaw. That's adorable. Whin did say Tyler's name. I think Whin is growing warmly to the human. I think Tyler is learning that Whin isn't always a total asshole.