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Red Masque 2004-06-27 . chapter 1
That's so sad...
one should never let people convince them that they're wasting time... unless maybe they're trying to create a waffle iron-hamster hybrid or something ridiculous like that. (just the most ridiculous thing I could think up off the top of my head)
great again!
rm
cramer 2003-12-22 . chapter 1
this is amazing. The rythm is good, but there were some places were you didn't follow it as well, and it threw off the pace of reading... sort of like a snag in precious silk. You write as if you know this from experience... either this is true or you have amazing insight. You need to start a band or something and start writing music to put these words to. Congratulations on having such a talent and being able to use it.
how do you delete accounts 2003-10-04 . chapter 1
Wow.

Everyone has felt this...Everyone. It really affected me, and I agree, I think it is your best poem (of all that I've read). And it's beautiful, just like you are in it.
Traced In Green 2003-08-10 . chapter 1
Amazingness. This was an amazing poem. You have talent.
luvs
Young'n'HopelessKid
restless-wandering 2003-06-26 . chapter 1
hm, i liked it... It seemed like a different style from you. It was very honest and straightfoward... And I liked the message :)
Epi Curean 2003-06-12 . chapter 1
I love your poem. I love the message. I love the way your words roll off my tongue as I read aloud.
You're good at this. Just keep writing.
kalede 2003-06-12 . chapter 1
Wow... this is just incredible.
9style 2003-06-06 . chapter 1
I like the poem. I like the message. Remember yourself to keep yourself and be yourself.
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Jeru134 2003-06-05 . chapter 1
that was the **! i luved it! tottaly understand it! girl u got TALENT!
Ade 2003-06-04 . chapter 1
Megan, you're a genius. But you know that. This one is definitely publishworthy. Interesting rhyme scheme too.
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