Wow. Such a strong emotion has been put into this, and it ended so well... Awesome, awesome job. I look forward to reading more from you!

Wow...such a strong poem! Many times, I feel indecisive and full of worry, too. The ending gave me the chills...great conveyance of emotion!

:)

WOW. I liked that! It was great! So sad, and the ending gave me shivers! I like poems that do that :) ;) Anyways, thanks for all your reviews!
Keep writing
~ionlyliveindreams

Hey there.
This is a really sad, but awesome poem. I don't think I'll be able to find words to describe it. I'm just running through your work, but this is good! It kinda freaked me out, because it was like you were writing about my deary self. I feel like I know you. Freaky huh?
Keep it up, nothing else to say but to check out some of my work; we write about the same stuff.
Phercraban

This is one powerful poem. The end is chilling.
It's nice to be able to just get your feelings out via writing. Angst poems are a favorite of mine.
This was very well done.

This is so sad! But there's always a nother way, I'm sure about that! Keep it up!
cio hoellenwauwau

wow powerful poem.
I had those feelings too. just kept thinking, is this really worth it? well, it is, with all the ** up (excuse ,y language) things in the world, there are a lot of good things too!!
keep beleaving in Jesus and He will help you, keep writing too!
Stray

Very dark and angsty. It felt like I was being pulled into this world, which I'm no real stranger to anyway. Great job.

i liked it! sorta creepy though. i could really sense your anger here.. keep writing ^^

Man. You aren't nice about the truth are you? It sux feeling that way. Worry if you wish to, no one has the right to tell you what and what isn't a sin except God. SK