Eh... I've got a LOT more stories of yours to read and review until I've reviewed them all.
Your Lovecraft writing style is amazing. Many might think not, but I do. It's almost just like the real thing. You also have nice ideas. Keep up the great work, Nick. ~I.W.

Here's my pledge to you, Nicky: each time you take down the review I leave for your story, I will return the following day and post it again. Either gain control of Fictionpress and ban reviews, or be prepared to spend a lot of time taking down reviews that don't praise your collection of misspelled words. Here's my review: this was terrible. Learn to spell first, then learn how to write. Hope that helps!

Gory and dark, but much better constructed than the other one I read.
And Lovecraft's spirit could be felt in every line.
Good work.

Hey- thought I might review this too.
Its another great one. You have some nice talent. Other thing that appears odd to me is in the end, the two last big paragraphs.
There was some spacing that seemed unfamiliar, unless you made an error on that. I don't think it hurt the work you have here, because this is outstanding.
Your poetic style of writing really awesome, and that it makes them interesting.
Hope to see more of you stories in the future.
WHispers In Silence

It seems so like the original Lovecraft!

I have to say you have a very different way of writing. I enjoy it very much. I do hope you continue to write. Have you ever thought about getting your works published? I think you have the potiental to be a wonderful writer. Good luck. And please continue to write.

Great story!! I was wondering if you can review my story called Earth is under attack. Thanks!

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