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| Punk'N'Rock Chick 2006-10-03 ch 1,  | abusecool |
| JessE 2003-10-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt really won't be fair to critique this poem because it would be based on feeling not fact. I don't like magic and sort so it really wasn't appealing to me. Maybe if u were vivid about the fighting and gore and HAHAHAHA *cough* yea it would be a nice poem to read to lil chidren so it doesn't scare their pants off, but for someone a bit older, the poem needed more action (and gore!). Yes, more action. *wink* i'm a fan, though :off to read more: |
| Crow08 2003-06-05 ch 1, | abuseGreat poem! I like the way it flowed, and the way that you rhymed words. Keep writing! |
| Exiled-Knight 2003-06-05 ch 1, | abusevery nice poem. It flowed really well. Keep Writing |