This had me smiling ever since the first "Mr. Daniels, I don't want to read this." or however it was phrased. Such a cute and enjoyable story! It's funny that Jon writes from expr

Erience but changes the genders. It lets the reader know more about the two men and introduces more about Jon and what he advance at writing, like you advance at writing fluffy cute shtuff! Great job!

Cute in a weird way, kind of rough around the edges but sweet and funny. I do like the little side comments to the teacher immensely though, it's something that I often do myself.

Hm...I presonally think that this teacher of which you speak is terribly cruel. I want to pop him like a horribly disformed bubble and then-NO! I WILL NOT MAKE YOU READ MY HORRIFICLY GORY DESCRIPTIONS OF PEOPLE'S DEATHS! Anyways, I kinda liked this...but it's not the best thing ever.

Aww, so darn cute.

Aw, that's pretty darn cute :)

NYO!Cute. I liked it a lot. There isn't much else to say because it was so short but I liked

That was hot! How can you not like it? And I mean hot like cool.

That was really good!

its cute
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It is fun to piss people off. (Especially the teachers.) Good writing, even if the fluff got stuck in my throat ;)

"and partly because they liked to piss people off" XD great stuff. I liked it!

Okay then. That was a bit... odd. I think it was kind of funny though, when he's like blushing. :) Hehe. Waht an ending.
-BarrenWasteland-

I found the dialogue very realistic. It puts the readers in his shoes. Great job

hey!how come the story don't go on?i mean it's a great start to a story and it could go on if you really wanted it to read more of your stuff .
oh if you have a spare moment could you r&r a story called If Only She Knew by AmberEye?thanks

Bitterly humorous. I like it. Keep writing.
Gabby