you have a thing for death and sadness. congrats! so do i! very good poem, woofed it ^^

Pretty good song, very poetic. Loved the part "Closing pages on my life/Sensation to our might/This cruel sea/Our sad death/Burning clouds/Crying sense" Good job

~Jess

damn, Travis. ur good. really good. i cant pinpoint my fav but this one rox...like ALL of yours...grr...hehe. anyway, rock on and keep it up, i love reading ur stuff.