woah, i really like this one. because of the rhyming...which i could never do also the rythms like perfect. awesome poem

This is really touching (you seriously don't know how much). I sent it to my friend cuz she's going through something like this. Very well written. Great job.

i really like the poem and i hope that your friend is able to see that the world is really a beautiful place if you look at it. GOdd luck to heer i hope that she recovers. I hope that u r okay too

wow. now that sent shivers down my back. short and to the point, and very frank. like the rhythm too! ^^
actually, i've tried to write some poems describing the difficulties in my life, but its so hard for me... i just end up incorportating them in my stories... *shrugs*
very touching. very well done. very everthing.

Dude, that was really sweet! Why didn't you tell me it was up?! Well anyway, it had a really good rythme and everything flowed together nicely. If your friend has read this I'm sure she'd be really touched.

Hey. Like I said before, it is VERY moving. You don't know how touching it really is, it takes an outsider looking in. I feel like the rhyming and rhythm fits perfectly. The whole thing is great! Good job.

-Fuu

P.S. - Man, I'm being serious, aren't I? ^_~