Yeah I was hoping it'd have some cool twist at the end up it ended way too abruptly. It's sort of annoying how he'll think something then two paragraphs later he'll repeat himself. o_O And you mispelled a lot of stuff and mixed up your grammar.

But overall it was pretty cool. Would've been better if Kyria turned out to be a ghost *LAUGHS* But yeah. ^_^

you really set the stage and atmosphere.A very engulfing at first but the voice seemed to get tired at the end,and your a little "wordy" "she rasided her left eyebrow and after that..."" Our lips locked for no more than three seconds before " but still better than me.

This is a really interesting story. I mean this is sort of how me and my best friend met. Please keep it up and if this is a true story, sorry about Kyria.

Wow. This was beautiful.

um. heh. wow? SHE DIED ON MY BIRTHDAY, MORON. UGH! I HATED THIS SO MUCH! well, actually, i loved it until she died on my birthday. that sucked. and i wondered why my 16th birthday was ** awful. but matt, this was an amazing story. this is so good.

Nothing to say, other than you are a very very talented author, not writer.

Aw that was so sad and really touching. Beautiful..absolutely beautiful.

All I can say is... beautiful, deep, wonderful. The words don't say enough. This is very...extremely...totally... well, you get the picture. This is a totally awesome, extremely beautiful, very deep, wonderful story.

You have a lovely style. For some reason, I kept identifying "The Poet" with Jehan Prouvaire...
~Barricades Revolution and dead French students~
Verity

That story was absolutely amazing. I was hooked from the first two paragraphs. Your writing style is interesting and addicting. The story itself was beautiful. Congrats.

Wow - I really, really loved this. I mean, everything about it. Probably that sounds lame, but I don't really know how to express it better than to just say 'gorgeous' and add it to my favorites. I'll definitely come and see what else you have - if it's anywhere near this good, you definitely have a big fan.

*wipes away tear*

Wow. What a amazing story, I've never read anything quite like this. Very interesting, and beautifully written. I enjoyed reading it very much. Hope you write more soon. :)

Brilliant.
Your writing abilities make me insanely jealous. Your vocabulary, language, character profiles and the story are flawless.
This was one of the best stories I read on Fictionpress yet.
Good luck. [puts the story into favourites]

That was excellent. *sniffle* keep up the good work.

Interesting. I really liked the idea of them suddenly meeting in a graveyard. I would have preferred it if Kyria didn't just suddenly disappear after only two days... But then again, her leaving hit me the same way it'd have happened to the narrator.