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Reviews For: Are you There?

jadedmari 2008-06-09 ch 1,	abuseYour presentation and flow is smooth-the only criticism I can think of is your lowercase "i" in the middle of one or two lines...I think that everyone has been where you were at some point or another. Keep up the good work.
heartbrokensoul 2005-01-09 ch 1,	abuseGod is there and he is watching over us all. He will awnser you in his own time. Just don't give up faith in him so easily
'neep 2004-08-24 ch 1, anon.	abusehey e.dolvich don't give up faith in God that easy, i know what you were thinking, wew all feel that way some times.
Fish 2004-02-21 ch 1, anon.	abuseHe's there E.D. He's there and he loves you.
niep 2004-02-12 ch 1, anon.	abuseim here
dracon 2004-01-18 ch 1, anon.	abuseThere is a balance to this world. Love and Hate. Pleasure and Pain. Life and Death. Good and Evil. I have seen evil, raw and pure. And I will see it again. It is my belief in a higher power, or God though, and that in myself, that keeps me sane. If nothing else try asking not, Are you there?, but What are you?
Maverick III 2003-06-28 ch 1,	abuseSipder: The Good can not be defined if there is no Evil. They need each other. That is what is think. Lots of people have doubts on their faith, no matter what religion you are talking about. I liked your poem. It's good to ask "Are you There?" sometimes.
Katie Neal 2003-06-17 ch 1,	abuseHe's there.
tigress2 2003-06-08 ch 1,	abusei think you really hit a mark with this one with alot of people, you certainly did with me.
Kittins cry 2003-06-08 ch 1,	abuseI can relate to this. Millions of people ask those questions everyday. "god" the whole htng, makes no since, yet the thought is so wonderful we want to believe,but where is the reason to? War, murder, rape, crime, and all tht, if he is sowonderful and there, how canhe let all this happen to us, or as a christian gone wrong would put it, has the devil taken over? Let Christians, Catholics, adn people who are just not sure feast their minds on that. Good poem by the way, it was well written. KW. ~Mutt~
Gleechumber 2003-06-07 ch 1,	abuseI can relate to this a lot. I've been having some serious problems with my faith. I know God is there, and yet I can't seem to see him anymore. This is a beautiful poem. I hope you find some release.
Spider 2003-06-05 ch 1,	abuseGod doesn't decide when you die, but he allows it to happen. With sorrow, perhaps. But allow it he does. How can a benevolent God allow evil to exist? Aye, that is the question, isn't it.

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