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au-d 2007-10-28 ch 2,	abusethere is a nice flow here, i enjoyed the banter between the characters. merick was a terrible spoil-sport. i enjoyed the action of the fight and found that i could follow along with it for the most part. keep up the good work :]
Jai Akari 2006-12-11 ch 22,	abuseNice story. I really like it. Update soon! :) -J.A.
biminator 2005-04-23 ch 22,	abusenice chapter. can't wait to see if it's possible to take the tracker off. update soon!
CommanderValeria 2005-03-31 ch 22,	abuseIt's been awhile since I've read this but I'm all caught up now. I really like this story and I absolutly love Morgan. She's got such a well developed personality. Good job. Update soon.
animalwriter 2005-03-31 ch 1,	abuseWow, that first chapter was cool! I'll come back and read some more later.
Uncle-Al2 2005-03-30 ch 22,	abuseThis is a great story and your characters are well-defined. I like the banter between the Captain and his co, but I feel you use too much secret language between them. I know that in reality people together for a long time develop a private way of communication, but it's getting in the way of the story. If you use a secret phrase, define it, unless it's absolutely clear by context. Don't make too many assumptions.On another note, why don't the good guys find a way of telling everyone what the bad guys have done? For what purpose are they sneaking around? Once the news is spread, things can be done with a little less hypertension. Please continue updating, thanks for sharing!
biminator 2004-12-12 ch 21,	abuse::fake nice tone:: aw. so cute. anyway, nice job. you finally updated! looking forward to the next one.
solocommand 2004-12-04 ch 21,	abusebs you cant write a good romantic scene!I like. i like a lot. morgan should kick garett's **. :P
PopcornandGreenery 2004-12-04 ch 21,	abuseExcelente! Muy importante! Really, I have no idea why but that phrase just sounds so cool in a Spanish accent, even though it doesn't make a whole lot of sense.It's just fun to say, I guess. Heh, watch this review turn into an email. Too bad you can't reply through reviews. I watched Peacekeep Wars again last night, but only the second half. I cried. Poor D'argo. sniff Ok, I'm probably wasting your time. Choose Life,Katie
kamui-kun 2004-08-24 ch 1,	abuseHi! I'm mostly a manga/action/fantasy reader but I think it's about time to broaden my idea on literature genres. Anyway, this really seems to be an interesting find. Usually I read of swords and martial arts but now I find a world filled with space ships and guns... and that's a welcome change. I definitely love your main character Morgan. Hell, I love all kick ** chicks! But I'm more intrigued by this Merick fella. Although he seems to be a pacifist, I feel that he could throw his weight around when needed. Cool start with the barfight! It describes your characters well. I dunno if the others are as permanent as the two I've mentioned; nevertheless, I'll keep an eye out for them. Good start! =)
biminator 2004-08-13 ch 20,	abusewell-enjoyed, except for the line "He hadn’t cried since she had died." which mildly confused me. I figured it out later, though. update soon.
PopcornandGreenery 2004-08-11 ch 20,	abuseHey, you know you say I give bad reviews? Well here's another one. :-P
solocommand 2004-08-10 ch 20,	abuse! ! ! So uh. looks like they need a bomb tech. Any chance morg is good with bombs? :-D
solocommand 2004-08-06 ch 19,	abuseis good. Make morgan not die, she rocks. and she and garrett need to like. iunno. Anyway, keep writing, must read more.
biminator 2004-08-06 ch 19,	abusewow. they finally scored a hit on her. I was beginning to think she was invincible. woohoo. almost fifty reviews for you. update soon.

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