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| SilentRebellion 2004-01-11 ch 1,  | abusei like your style and this poem was short but contained more thoughts than most of the poems done by other ppl on this site. |
| Unfinished Author 2003-06-15 ch 1, | abuseNice, short n sweet lol. Perhaps put a line after each comma so it reads down the page. I think i will have more of an effect then, as it gives the poem a better pace. Congrats on another great piece of work! |