wow. that was amazing, again. loved the emtions displayed.

This was very well written. Your message came in loud and clear. Especially because of
"I have no beginning,
No middle,
No end,

I loved that because it gives a very good description of what nothing is...how it feels.

Wow, I can't say ANYTHING bad about this it rocks!

hmm...call it quick? well...uh..
The rhymeing is a little stretched in places, I mean, like there are places where it looks like the story of the poem took a turn just because u found an ending that rhymed... It's not as bad as it could be tho...
Also, you do notice how there was a major change half-way thru, right? Last 8 or so lines. Btw, "Any more" is one word. I don't know if that part about beginning, middle, and end fits...
yea...um...I like the idea of it, tho. Like ur weeping, but ur tears are ice. And the last couplet expresses a change that flowed well in the poem...
Yea,..I don't know. It's ok, could be worse, but ok.

beauitful poem

I'm not sure if I like this one, it def ain't your best.
As for spacing, I use notepad for my stuff and I just press enter to space out, hope that's some help.