it's good but doesn't quite capture the momentum behind suicide. it doesn't go as in depth as i think it should. still, for some odd reason, i found humor in it. that's enough for me to like it.

I like the structure of this. Yes yes good job at being depressed ;) Although maybe nicer to not be!
T

Great poem, really. I've been there. Well, not that close, something kept me going. But anyways, great job, keep writing. And thanx for reviewing, I know title is confusing, but in my mind it does have to do something with the song...yeah I know, 0.o
luvs
JP

this is a good poem, you hit the target perfectly...good job, and to answer ur question, yes, more of Kim's Story is coming, i was just busy writing other stuff recently...great poem
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Oh goodness, this poem is so strong. It made me a bit teary-eyed. I could follow through the poem, it was easy to read and I got the message.
I am very impressed, and I don't really like reading "Suicide" poems. I know you said depression was odd for you, and I'm glad because I'd hate anyone to do this to themself.

Steph. that is so deep. It's so unlike you. It's amazing. You need to submit that to a poetry contest or something.

You did an excellent job, though, I can't really see how you can duct tape your own wrists and ankles together... A very dark, and very good poem. Keep up the good work.