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| Rozlin 2005-02-07 ch 1,  | abuseit's good but doesn't quite capture the momentum behind suicide. it doesn't go as in depth as i think it should. still, for some odd reason, i found humor in it. that's enough for me to like it. |
| Theodore Bram 2004-10-23 ch 1, | abuseI like the structure of this. Yes yes good job at being depressed ;) Although maybe nicer to not be! T |
| Traced In Green 2004-02-01 ch 1, | abuseGreat poem, really. I've been there. Well, not that close, something kept me going. But anyways, great job, keep writing. And thanx for reviewing, I know title is confusing, but in my mind it does have to do something with the song...yeah I know, 0.o luvs JP |
| IllusionKat 2004-01-08 ch 1, | abusethis is a good poem, you hit the target perfectly...good job, and to answer ur question, yes, more of Kim's Story is coming, i was just busy writing other stuff recently...great poem ttfn |
| Crazy Arms 2004-01-03 ch 1, | abuseOh goodness, this poem is so strong. It made me a bit teary-eyed. I could follow through the poem, it was easy to read and I got the message. I am very impressed, and I don't really like reading "Suicide" poems. I know you said depression was odd for you, and I'm glad because I'd hate anyone to do this to themself. |
| Ebony Falcon 2003-09-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseSteph. that is so deep. It's so unlike you. It's amazing. You need to submit that to a poetry contest or something. |
| ShadowChii 2003-06-06 ch 1, | abuseYou did an excellent job, though, I can't really see how you can duct tape your own wrists and ankles together... A very dark, and very good poem. Keep up the good work. |