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Rozlin
2005-02-07
ch 1,
abuseit's good but doesn't quite capture the momentum behind suicide. it doesn't go as in depth as i think it should. still, for some odd reason, i found humor in it. that's enough for me to like it.
Theodore Bram
2004-10-23
ch 1,
abuseI like the structure of this. Yes yes good job at being depressed ;) Although maybe nicer to not be!
T
Traced In Green
2004-02-01
ch 1,
abuseGreat poem, really. I've been there. Well, not that close, something kept me going. But anyways, great job, keep writing. And thanx for reviewing, I know title is confusing, but in my mind it does have to do something with the song...yeah I know, 0.o
luvs
JP
IllusionKat
2004-01-08
ch 1,
abusethis is a good poem, you hit the target perfectly...good job, and to answer ur question, yes, more of Kim's Story is coming, i was just busy writing other stuff recently...great poem
ttfn
Crazy Arms
2004-01-03
ch 1,
abuseOh goodness, this poem is so strong. It made me a bit teary-eyed. I could follow through the poem, it was easy to read and I got the message.
I am very impressed, and I don't really like reading "Suicide" poems. I know you said depression was odd for you, and I'm glad because I'd hate anyone to do this to themself.
Ebony Falcon
2003-09-18
ch 1, anon.
abuseSteph. that is so deep. It's so unlike you. It's amazing. You need to submit that to a poetry contest or something.
ShadowChii
2003-06-06
ch 1,
abuseYou did an excellent job, though, I can't really see how you can duct tape your own wrists and ankles together... A very dark, and very good poem. Keep up the good work.
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