you're almost there.

This is a great poem, i like how well written it is, you're talented.. keep it up

Tok

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aaw!! sad!! berry gud!!

Pretty cool song. The short lines that are scattered in it every now and then are effective. Nice imagery, as well.

~Jess

this is another one of those songs that i really love the ending. it just sums the whole thing up. good job on another victory...yay!