Update soon...

More! More! Please, I can't wait to read more...I hate to admit it, but reading "internet diaries" is quite interesting...

This is good, but pretty confusing. Your people are all getting mixed up. Is there some way you can clarify them? Otherwise, good!

Hurry up and update *glares*... Seriously... it's good and origonal. O-R-I-G-O-N-A-L That's different...

this is really really really really good. Is part 2 going to still be in online diary-like format?It would be interesting to see some direct speech. You're a good writer

Dude, how can this fic not have reviews?!?!?!?!? Sure, it's slightly weird, but I prefer to call it original, because it ROCKS. It is so different from all the other stuff that ppl do. It gets just a smidge confusing about which one is talking where. perhaps you can put the name before the entry? anyway, yeah, I'm lovin' it. You have me totally hooked on every one of the characters! I can't decide which one is my fav yet. I can tell it's going to get interesting!
Well, update on this one - and don't think I haven't noticed that you haven't updated since last year! - and I give you more review, yes? I can TOTALLY sympathize with reviewlessness. I'm new on fictionpress, I wrote two poems, and not all that many reviews, ya know? yes, you know. I've been a member on fanfiction.net under the name I_LOVE_VEGETA for I don't remember how long, maybe a year, maybe not, anyway, NOBODY REVIEWS and it makes me so discouraged! But you know how all this is.
SO my point is, I love this fic and I'm DYING to read more! Update it! Update it! Update it!
Your Fan,
Kaye90
P.S. UPDATE SOON!

I really like this, It makes me think. THe concept was really interesting too, i've never read a story with this setup before. Good job! is there more?

Well i reviewed. I think this is interesting, are they ever gonna meet? That would be pretty cool! I hope you keep on writing!

Hey!

I liked this! You described! But couldn't get where the setting was because it was all around the world. But hey this was good anyway.

It's intersting but is it going anywhere in particular? and what happened to the other version?