hm...uh...interesting...I like how the ending sorta hints at something, maybe it's me, but I think at something darker...maybe...

I really like this poem.
I can fully realte to it, in every way with every word I know what you are talking about. this isnt one of your worst poems, its the one that displays the most explicid side of you. Its very good. A very exclent job. keep it up.
~Serina

OH GURL!! you kick so much ** with that..i'm feelin you...haha..**..that was good...O BABY..reminds me of ashanti..haha..keep this up girl..great job

~Sandra~

another great poem just a hint of sexuality and just enuf