Nice description, and I found your word choice especially interesting. The only error that I saw was "It had been 3 days..." '3' should be spelled out.

Other than that, nice story!

I wish you luck with future projects and thank you for sharing.

-xXDarkDeception600Xx

I really like your style of writing. It is beautiful. Keep it up!

WOW! that was really good!!
I totally love his perspective (for a vampire)
not that i think he is right but thats an entirely different story.
if your at all stressed about what to do now with the story (cause of the last review) don't worry about it. just don't make the heroine like Bella. DON'T GET ME WRONG! I THINK SHE IS GOOD FOR THE STORY!! (i shout at the fans)
thats all.
Rock Out \m/
~Tsukiyomi

I hope you add more!
its a great point of view,
and its surprisingly not one of those -im-a-vampire-who-enslaves-a-girl-and-falls-in-love so far.
...well at least i hope its not.
also, one helpful hint;look up top wines and use that in your stories it will be more detailed.
(not that its needed)
(I hope im not sounding like a know it all)
5 stars!
-Taylor

Thank you all for your kind reviews. I will try to improve and write more to appease your hunger for more vampire goodness. ^_^
Thank you all so much.

aya! pleesh write more!

Vampires! YAY! Beautifully written, great intro...I'd love to read more! keep it comin' :)

Ah, a refreshing, almost philosphical take on vampires *_*. Lovely writing style you have there, although a few sentances don't flow quite as nicely as the rest (mainly the last two paragraphs seem to lack a certain essence of the rest. From flowing imagery to more simplistic actions and descriptions, or something of that nature). I loved this sentance the most, however.

"We are just dolls, locked in a glass cabinet, slowly watching the world rot and die."

Great imagery there~ *_*

please please please keep writing! i cant tell you how much i like this so far!