hmm.. nice.

I should have taken ur advice and waited for the edited version but I couldn't resist. I am not gonna say anything, because the things I was gonna say were the ones you said not to say. I just had to put int my sixpence's worth. Don't get me wrong, this is a good story. A bit shaky, but my initial assumption still stands. :) P.S I AM NOT AN OLD LADY WHO HAS NO LIFE.

I LOVE YOU! (NOT THAT WAY) I DON'T SAY THIS ALOT, ONLY K L MORGAN, SJ MASS, AND KIANA CAELUM HAVE HEARD IT. SEE, I EVEN WENT TO ALL THE TROUBLE OF LOGINING IN JUST FOR YOU! I'M SO EXCITED, MY STOMACH FEELS TINGLEY, AND I FEEL LIKE SAVING THIS STORY FOR THE LAST LIKE A CHILD SAVES HER FAVORITE SWEET TO SAVOR LAST. three chapters and i'm already captivated. that's a record! :)

The Mystmara dance sounds very sensual and I like it, but when I visualize it, it reminds me a lot of the scene from the Phantom of the Opera where the Phantom and Christine are doing the meeting scene during the second on stage opera [Don Juan Triumphant]. The movements were pretty much the same, but it's probably just my imagination. :D

Anyway, I like it. I'm happy this is finished. xD; I don't have to wait for new chapters to come out. ;D

Hi there! I've read your entire part1 story and half of the second part and remember reviewing a coupla chapters a long time ago. I just wanted to tell u that I drew an interpretation of how I imagine your characters Morlas and Alex (thus a fanart lol) and it's on this site along with credits to you: http://elfwood.lysator.liu.se/art/r/a/ral90/co.jpg.html // anyway, I hope you can leave a comment there or put it up on ur site or something, that would be great! =)

Cheers

Man! I feel so sorry for Rowan! Despite all the people who liked Traven. I felt so sorry for him because he was the one who liked Nicole first. :Stupid Nicole:But, oh well... I hope he has a really great part in the sequel!I hate Traven! But it is your story so I won't stop you from trying to make Traven sound like a good guy. That one I'll never fall for.-but I like Kiran...which wasn't really important.

Wow, you did a superb job in writing this many chapters and keeping it well together with this many characters. I really love your story it was so tragic and sad. I was actually teary eyed when I read Nicole’s death chapter. I feel sorry for Nicole’s character because she lived such a sad life on earth and in the demon world. I feel sorry for Alex also. I agree with pairing Nicole/Traven together and I understand that Traven becomes a vile person to Nicole due to jealousy but I wish you would have written more about how secure the bond between them were because I can’t see how she can still love him with all the abuse and rape she went through. You made some real cool characters but you made Traven seem like an incompetent Lord sometimes because he seems to let things happen in his house and not get to the bottom of things. One thing is that he did not even try to find out who killed Amelia. I think you just like Kiran too much to let him be caught that fast. What happen to your sequel did you decided not to post it? Well I hope you reconsider. This story is really awesome therefore I hope you reread it again and strengthen some areas but don't change it. Thanks for writing and sharing your creativity to readers like myself.

WTF! Why must they die?!?Ar..whatever...just as sad or sadder ending than the phantom of the opera ( the book one, not the fanfiction) Somehow i was hoping they would live.

Hey, I love this story, but can't find any of the buttons you mention on your website! I can't find any button that says 'art for chosen' or guardian or whatever, and I can't find the uncut version of this chapter, which I really want to read! Even if it's not on the website anymore can you send me the uncut chapter at REddragon238@aol.com?

i read your story - the whole of it - and came out thinking that you have a lot of dedication to stick to it for so long (more than 500pages). so props for that.i liked your orignality in creating your own universe, but thought the characters were out of depth. There were major inconsistancies in character throughout the story and many characters lacked depth - as if they were mere puppets manipulated to perform actions unsuitable for their form. i liked the first few chapters, they laid out the foundation for the story quite well, and set a nice pace. i remember thinking, wow Nicole seems like a great character. however, as the story progressed, i felt that her character grew twisted and became whiny, insecure and rather dumb. her personality faded and a manequin took over. much can be said of the characters travern and lucas. travern was decent to nicole at first, but then became a monster, only to revert to a whipped husband for the ending. lucas - first he was nasty, then became decent (to danle), and finally changed to a mind controlling ** who lusted after an elf. i though the story, plotwise, was weird and at times scattered. although i cannot fault you on your writing - the actual writing had a good flow; had hardly any spelling mistakes and descriptions were about the right length (not toolong and windy, and not too short and plain.)

in short, props on your writing style and dedication, but try to work on your characters and plot.

Wow... I usually don't review until I finish reading all of what the author has up... But this time I had to! It's so god! ah... yes... now to continue reading...

i don't know if i can keep reading anymore.

i mean, there is no happiness in this story. each chapter just gets more and more depressing...

but i'm addicted, and i can't stop until i know if all ends well or not.

That bas#*$%. How dare he do that!

First Taalya and now the Guardian.

WHY why?(sobs)

Neapon:oh no Traven! (looks around to make sure no one was their) Go blue dragon!^_^ (does her victory dance)*Kiri,who had hidden on a tree falls off the branch.*Neapon:(looks around to see what she strangely felt was an exasperated and shocked thud but finds nothing and continues thus with the dance)