hey thats a really sad story!! It sounds like some kind of suicide note but at the end theres this twist ending but it could still be a suicide not ... i don't know its really sad but good and confusing if thats possible to all be in one story. Anyways i like it and will keep reading and reviewing! hope you read my story coming sometime this week! (*)~[Mornin(*)Starr]~(*)

This is so sad, but it's sweet right there at the end. I like this one.

that is so sweet.

oh wow. that put tears in my eyes. That was really good. I like how it was written and ever ything. awesome job

Oh, that's so cute and sad! *sniffs* This sounds a lot like it's a letter to her father, and that gives it power. I like the emotions the narrator expresses. It's not even too short, either! Very nice. I will be back later to read one of your chapter stories. And thanks for reviewing for me. I appreciate it. ~Chloe

Wow, so sad! This is a very well written story. Excellent job!

hmm hmm hmm... that gives it a very touching ending... but i feel like you didn't detail it... *not that i'm too detailed...heh...*
newayz... juss decided to stop by to read some of your work...
oh and from where i am... the whole 'madly in love' thing in my story... i made it a lil unrealistic for that... cuz i wanted the character to hurry up and get a guy... so... i juss did something stupid. oh wel.
have a nice dai...i'm a lil high right now... lolz...

aw, thats such a touching sotry, very sad and powerful, awesome job

Y_Y *cries* This...was...great!! *cries some more*
luvs
~*RiotGirlGC33*~

this is very good. one of your best actually.

that was wonderful. I can relate to your story more than i ever have any other. Thank you so much.
~ Becca