 Wrong Name Tag 2003-06-10 . chapter 1Pretty cool song, I liked the chorous. Only thing is that I think the end could have been done better. Like, instead of "Or is it just you/Oh is it just you/Playing tricks on my mind//Yes you're playing tricks on my mind" you could have something similar to "Or is it just you/Oh is it just you/Playing tricks on my mind//oh is it just you/Yeah, playing tricks on my mind" or something like that. Yeah, bad example/advise, just saying I think the end bit could be done a bit more powerfully. Otherwise, nice job
~Jess |