Wow, don't we all hate Mary Sue?? And love to see her underneath our boot from time to time??

...whatever.



It was nice.

v. amusing story...great plot! so funny! (my friends are wondering why i kept bursting out into laughter at completely random times...i think they think im crazy...)

Bravo for Ann! And I must say that Mary-sue was indeed a very typical Mary-sue. I'm glad she came to an unhappy end before she could spread her ideals in the medieval time...

Unfortunatley, several hundred years later, they have been been widley spread. *sigh* It's an unnatural disease...

Very interesting...needs a better ending, however the story was funny! You do a lot of comedy, or I'm stupid.

I have just one complaint, it's short. Write a longer story, I would truly enjoy it!

Another good story for you to chalk up. I hope to see more good ones.

An entertaing short story with an orignal plot. Nice job

It's true. Every other story is about princesses who hate being princesses, and run away to become warriors. Though I do like a good warrior maiden story in a while, this was very refreshing! Well done!