This is one of my favorite original one shots. I love the dialogue format, and your sarcasm and humor.

Thats so cute! :3

I love the ending! So sweet and ironic... I hate andrew now! O_O how could Sunnie do that. Dx

:3 Anyways really sweet story!~

Hehehe...
It showcases your unique sense of humor perfectly. Little snippet of constructive criticism: Dialogue might be a little stronger if you cut some of the tags, particularly at the beginning (eg. he yelled, she said,). It's overall very good, but to pick nits, the tags made it a leetle rough in the first quarter or so. Great randomness, great characterization, great Cindymoon-characteristic sarcastic tone!
--Museworks

Heheehee..this was funny, and poignant, and all out...I don't really know. I'm trying to sort out my feelings about this, but...ah, whatever. My thinking cap has been lost long ago, anyhow. =) Great writing.

~Ari

Well, i know this a dream that ive had many times...maybe all of us have, lol. well, i really like this!!

((btw, thanks for reviewing my stories ::huggles::))

Poor Shawn! ;_; Great story, I like Sunnie's personality a lot... :;chuckle:: but back to the point... poor, poor Shawn ;_;

~Prince(ss)

That was really good. The ending was cute. Good job!

That was really good. It reminds me of me and my friends when we have convos. The end was so sweet (yes I do have to be mushy by saying that was "sweet"). Keep it up!

Hey tree! it's your favorite poet! ^~
Nice dialouge you've got here... what inspired it? and and and who's talking? I'm sorry... I'm totaly out of the mix Y.Y

wow I liked that, it was really good.

I agree with the "Life's unfair."
hn... me like how Sunnie's name is opposite of her character. ^^; I like Shawn too. ^^; BTW...which real event is this inspired by?

Life is unfair...and sorries again I lost the my revision thing...but it doesn't appear as if you need it.