Yes, I am that Kristen's friend. I saw her picture on her binder and asked for the story behind it. She gave me the link and I decided to reply. (I am also the one that is completly obsessed with your other manga...I even got into a debate with someone about wheter the bando was a boy or girl. And I was right!)

What a great story. Angsty, but not too much. I love the fragmented scenes. It mirrors Ai's confused life perfectly!

This is so sad! But good. Did you write the things (they look like song lyrics, but perhaps I've been reading too much bad fanfiction) in italics? If so, extra ice cream for you!

This is a wonderful piece of writing. And because I love it so much, I'll put down the strange formating and occasional spelling error to the horrors of uploading. All in all, awesome!

;-; Unbelievable. A great read !! ^O^

~ Noelle ~

unceasingly beautiful. what more to say.

Wow! This chap. was REALLY good! ^_^

But.. what's Haru gonna do? Is he gonna rape Ai? What did her parents mean by Haru's family falling? :/ TELL ME!!

Post a new chapter soon! ^^

oh...nice! c'mon, tree, work on the next chapter! aw poor Ai~! tre~you're making me cry! ;_;...^^ ya know it's me...MikoKagomeSama...i just changed my pename...b/c O_O; i feel weird having a anime-related pename on a site for original stories...^^ so~yeah
n e who...KEEP UPDATING THIS FIC ASAP!

-The Cynical Moonlit Child-

O no! bad stuff is happening! Plots against families and...um... eh-hem...

On a lighter note, I Love rain, it feels nice to walk in the rain! who needs umbrelas anyway? They only sheild you from rain, and thats a bad thing. Am I right, or am I right?
Every story should have rain in it! but rain shouldn't bring bad stuff... It should make everyone happy.

Hurry up and write Tree! We're all waiting!

wa! *sob sob*
It's so depressing...
so beautiful...
write some more!

Oh my gosh *clutches chest* That was one heaving emotional rollercoaster.

I love drama *sob*

I can't believe I haven't read this in a while! And reading it straight out like this just makes the entire reading experience much more striking.

Must sleep... must not have nightmares of Ai-chan...

foxdance

you never cease to amaze me ^^
good title.
good stuff.
^^ have fun and enjoying writing. because i'll enjoy reading the next chapter.

That was... intense. Damn, i'd love to read more but I gotta go home now...

must.come.back.for.more...

~FD

Yay!! Another chapter!!
I can't wait for the next one, so i can read it and wait for the next one ^~
and fyi, I love the noodle scene too

::sniffle:: ::cries:: OMG! that was amazing tre~! ;_; ::sniffle:: hurry up and write! i'm watching you~! TT_TT

ok...since fp.com seems to cut off my review whenever I put in that...expression(?), I won't do that anymore. XO!
“Trust me, there’ll come a time when you will hate me.”
how...depressing. o.O;;
I LOVE the way you write this story. hee.

Another great chapter! This story is so great! Do you write on Fanfiction.Net?

I'm starting to understand the story a bit better now! Ai's like a cyborg or and android or a enhanced human of something!

wow. this is one of ur longer ones, but its' good. It stays consistent with quality throughout the whole thing. it seems like the plot is thickening. Climax point! Good job. make sure u dont' forget to send me 9 in advance ^_^