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| Be Summer Rain 2003-07-28 ch 1,  | abuseExcellent work - great imagery, great words, and you really get into your character's head. =) |
| cosmo-queen 2003-06-24 ch 1, | abuseVery good poem. I can relate to that feeling of looking at your childhood and wondering where everything went wrong. In the end though, you just have to hope for better days. Keep writing :) *cosmo-queen* |
| Demeter Rose 2003-06-20 ch 1, | abuseOh, this poem is sad. Very good and beautiful, but sad. You're a great poet. |
| Amie Lee 2003-06-12 ch 1, | abuseWell, it's my policy to review people who reviewed me-- and I'd have to say I really love all your work. I'm glad you like Evanescence, too-- them and 12 Stones are my favorite bands. Keep up the great work!! |
| Wasted Postage 2003-06-11 ch 1, | abuseAnother excellent poem. Very sad but wonderful in its own unique way. Fabulous work! |
| ColorCrayons 2003-06-09 ch 1, | abusehehehe, i found out who u were without u telling me...yay for memory! anyway, i really seriously liked this one. the only part that i can think to comment negitivly on isnt that big of a deal, just when it says "and i wish i could erase the past, Wish i could go back" it kind of contridicts each other. but other than that good job |
| obsidian katana 2003-06-09 ch 1, | abusewonderful poem! yeah, i'm sure those kinda people would feel this way. nicely written, you expressed the feelings well. good job! keep on writing! and thanks for the reviews! |
| Not Just a Little Girl 2003-06-09 ch 1, | abuseO interesting! This is great, and i love the way the character is noticing that she's doing things she never would've done. Hm, i can't seem to get my words out today, cause i can't explain what I wanna say **shuts up** |
| Needa S 2003-06-07 ch 1, | abuseAwesome so full of meaning...Excellent job! Thanks for your kind reviews. |
| PainKiller 2003-06-07 ch 1, | abuseWow, Bethany, once again, you have stunned me into silence... Ok, I'll review you, and then I'll go back to being stunned. I loved the idea of wanted to go back to being a child, and the losing of innocence. The line "Late nights and extra shots" was excellent, and really showed the loss of that innocence. You did an excellent job. |
| NatashaRostof 2003-06-07 ch 1, | abuseMy gosh, that sounds like someone I (er, we) know. This is an awesome poem, dear. Very...hm. I can identify with it through that person I mentioned up there (read my mind, hon). But it's well written, as is to be expected coming from you. :o) Awesome work. |