That was very well-written! You're so good at rhyming...I'm jealous. ^_^ Yes, anyway, I think you should write more poetry; you're really very good!

~Stormy

Your poem paints a beautiful picture. I would love to see you draw a picture to go with it.

Wowees...What a great poem! Your rhymes work very well, and the poem is just so...good!
>winged one

I like it- it's a nice little dream :)