I know how this feels. Brilliantly written and i and many others i'm sure, can relate to this.

Ya know, life is like that, isn't it?

wow... its so violent so vivid and yet so deep with meaning, that anyone who's been pushed away from their true self can relate to... bravo...I bow to the master of his creations...

This should probably be rated higher than a 'G', at least a 'PG'.

I love the parts about the sewing/stitching/thread, and the last five lines make a very great ending.

wow your a wicked good writer.. that poem is dope, keep up the good work.

Read and Review my stuff if u want !

wow! excuse my french, but that was fcking awesome. i rarely say this, but you have talent. your words are just so powerful. (oh, i just didnt like the "Iron Maiden". it was too specific. i dont think you'll understand that, but i have an aversion to words that are too specific. i prefer describing instead of presenting.) anyway, the picture of torture is very vivid. i like it very much. and the ending lines are creepy and quite sad. excellent work. it's poems like this that make me smile and renew my faith in man's greatness.

blinkie

mm... ::thinking::

i love it, i admire ur style and visions.