 Earthsong12 2004-04-03 . chapter 1Very cute. You know, it’s a big mystery: what do babies think before they can talk? Just feelings and images, I guess...neat to think about. Whoops, I’m supposed to be talking about your poem aren’t I? hehe ^-^ It’s very good. It has a nice rhythym. ( I can never spell that darn word!) ^_^ |
 Lusofil 2003-08-20 . chapter 1Aptly describes the blessing that is a baby - and the awesome responsibility we owe them. |
 Priscilla 2003-08-10 . chapter 1 true, very true |
 lebuffle 2003-07-12 . chapter 1That's so sweet! Well done! |
 CoolBeans18s 2003-06-09 . chapter 1I'd never thought about this. Supremely cute!
~ CoolBeans18s |
 Keep it 100 2003-06-08 . chapter 1That was cute.
~Heart of the Sword |
 Smoky Bear 2003-06-08 . chapter 1something i hadn't thought of before, (but i don't really think about babies)
its such a cute haiku... beautifully composed |