Sad poem. It was well-written though. Very nice...

i like this one, its sorta like a story, your talented keep up the great work! :)

wow. that was really strong. lots of great emtions and details. The last stanza was defiantely the strongest.

I like the whole thing... some of it is just so detailed... lovely.

I especially like the last stanza and two lines though, they're just... the perfect ending.

Mia :)