Great Story

Hi there! Awesome story so far - i read in every possible seconde thte past two days and am now going to start on the next part. Keep up the grea writing! :D

I love this! :] It's so amusing and cute. I think I'm going to read the sequel, then go back and read Then and Now. Loves. You did a great job on this. I love everyone, although I get confused with the relatively similar names. Still, sweet story, great job.

i do crew now whenever i go im going to think of that...crap.

Oh Min gets to meet the parents, daunting. I love it so far :)

No, not the rainbow dreds! I'll have to go into mourning now... *sniff* I guess it's a blessing he didn't need to cut them off, though.

Hehe it amuses me how when he asks for advice from Lin, Faun assumes something horrible and probably illegal has happened. I kinda like getting glimpses of the old Lin.

No, Min, don't do it! No good can come of this! Stop! Freeze!

Aw, and they got back to school without the readers getting to see any Lin/Faun lime :( Know what else would be nice at some point, if at all possible? Rain/Janet lime. I dunno how interested you or most of your readers would be in that, but I'd certainly enjoy it.

Lin not the threatening type? Not anyMORE, maybe...

Yay, finally it seems like we might get some Lin and Faun action! I've missed it.

It's kind of sweet that Nadir didn't expect anything in return. Like he wouldn't allow himself, or like he would admire Min without really ever giving in completely.

Lol, are they about to see a side of Nadir that only three of them have seen before? I'm so amused.

I'm surprised nobody asked Nadir when Faun said it was a sidhe thing. He probably wouldn't have explained it anyway.

Do not feel bad about describing things, it is most certainly not a bad habit, especially for a writer. Maybe you should draw before writing more often.

Hehe corporate headhunter indeed. And Faun's assumption about what Grey and Sky did all day. And Min's shameless teasing of Nadir. All very, very funny.