That was really good. I liked how she actually told about the transition, she didn't jsut say I started magic and then before I knew it I was killing people. Maybe she should look into getting published!

Tell your friend that it was a pretty good story! I'm sure she'd love to hear it! ^_^!

whoa...tel ya friend that the story was great and deep...makes you wonder if there really is a person out there like that, ne? ^__^

Anyways, you both have talent..if ya want you can look into readers digest for publishing little short stories and they pay you...and if they liked you they keep you on and show your stories to bigger and better publishers...i should know...i did a little research and so did my mom after i got publish with a locate newspaper back at home...

give it a try...what can happen, ne? ^__^

oh cool story I like it