This is actually quite good. I think you should write some more.

ooh this story rocks! Please update!

I love it! I love it! I love it! You really should continue!

Today is a good day, because today is the day I discovered your stories. You may never update this again, but I'll always remember it and smile when I think of Risk or coming-out stories. Thank you for a lovely read.

This is beautiful. I like the atmosphere, which is rather ominous, especially in the first chapter. Please continue.

This is really really good! Please continue.

you are the best... I think you should write a novel and get it published. ^_^

Those were good chapters. I would really enjoy seeing how the whole argument with Mark's parents was going to turn out but you may not get to it.

Wow. I like this story a lot. I do hope you continue. Good luck.

I really like it. I'm anti-homosexuality, but when it is well written, I enjoy it as much as straight work. The two were developed wel, and the other characters were also developed in an underthe table way. Great. I'd really like to see more. If you find a plot and continue, I'm sure the story will find it's way noto my favorite's list. (Do you notice how much I like to bribe too?) Leen seems like a great person. The fact that she can accept that about her brother and get Mark and Sean together is awesome of her! Great first 2 chapters!

angst rocks. It really does. It adds twists to stories. I'm so sorry bout the gender mix up...lol. Anywho, this is gonna be a slash isn't it? Well, slashes, if handled properly, can be just as good as non-slashes! It's kinda wierd. I know a gay guy named Mark. He's pretty cool. But, he's not hiding things like this Mark, i don't think...well, anyway, great start. I shall read chapter 2 now!

Woo Hoo! Loved it a lot again! If you can manage it, I would love to read more and I'll keep reviewing!

it's good that you continued this story. the parent/child coming out tension is definitely a realistic depiction. you develop your characters well. i especially enjoyed the brother-sister interactions. it really added to the whole family dynamic. in short, well-written, enjoyable, and very believable.

i like it. definitely continue. :-)

I'm going to leave you a review because you said to, not that there's anything new to say. What you wrote here was absolutely beautiful; the way you captured the moment, the emotion, the people behind it, everything. You should definitely continue.