maybe its just ur poems but im really into suicide...not that im going 2 commit it or anything its just poems about them get 2 me...i dunno...well good job on the poem i like that its another persons view of suicide and how u bring them to tell their feeling for them.
much luv
sumchick

aw, i love your poems, the meanings are awesome, keep on writing.

okay i am not going to say ur name but i do know it... cuz i don't know if u want me to say it on here but this wouldn't happen to be about ur bf would it?

WHOA! hey headstrong, me again. i've never read this poem before so i just felt like revewin' and readin' it!! oh, i got AOL back! YAY! don't know why im tellin' u dat,i just am! well, love ur poem, keep it up ^_^

Hey my bestest buddiest! How ja doin'?
Asked Big John out yet? Bet not...wuse.
Just addin' you to my fav. Authors list, you dont mind that, do you o' phycotic one?

Ja Ne!
-Pori-Pori-
your only friend..^-^; Kidding...*whimpers* dont hurt me...

This is another really good piece. You depict the feeling of being torn well. Good work, keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*